TNOAT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Return of The Vinstigator]

Not bad

~review~

Ok after seeing this i truly think this doesn't deserve RCP. The graphics weren't good considering it was sprited and the drawings looked like ms paint :\. The humor was ok with some funny lines and what not but only to a certain level. The sound quality was good with some very good voice acting. The animation could definitely use some work. The poses were all alike with just a saved symbol of a graphics or movieclip. Overall this flash wasn't great but had some enjoyable humor that some people will ebjoy.

~good points~
Great sound quality
quality voice acting

~things to improve upon~
Try drawing your own characters
If you choose to do sprite animation get them some different poses

*TnoaT

Vinstigator responds:

Glad you liked the voice acting and some of the humor. I worked hard to make the voice acting stand out :)

[Cales-Kales:Pile of Crap]

Ok just stop

I'm gonna write a completely honest review for you here, not some lying bullshit. Also c'mon i know you can be better than to use alts to review your own submissions making them sound great, thats for past underdog cheaters(which is still a gay thing to do).

~review~
The flash was lacking content as it only went about in action for maybe 30 seconds. The graphics were below average with shaky lines in the stick figure animation. The sound quality is horrible though the music doesn't sound too bad. The animation was pretty smooth except for the stand still image of a stick man, i would have much rather seen an animated bit.

~good points~
Pretty smooth animation~

~things to improve upon~
Play button
replay button
No still images
try to smooth the lines out more
Download the music instead of a horribly recorded by microphone clip

*TnoaT

Cales-Kales responds:

Yeah it sucked. Thats wy its called Pile of Crap. It meant a lot that you were honest. LOL.

[The Chores]

Lol

~review~

It was a fair submission. The voice acting was great but had hardly any. The song was funny and fit very well with the animation. The graphics were good with quite a nice shading style. The proportions on the character could use some work though. The animation was mainly smooth but had a few buckles and graphical overloads frequently. The humor was good with the song and all.

~good points~
Good graphics
nice shading
funny song
great voice acting

~things to improve upon~
graphical overloads
Make it longer

[One Man Collab]

Excellent!

~review~

Wow, I really wasn't expecting much from this as reading the title. It was amazing, truly. The graphics were excellent and the animation was top notch and looked professional. The humor was non existent but really, it wasn't intended. My favorite scenes were the ones were you used lots of particle effects, i love making particle effects as well.

~good points~
Fitting music
excellent animation
amazing graphics

~the bad~
Finish some of them please.

Tentionmaru responds:

I might finish the fire and Ice one. It had a different idea, so it'd be fun to keep that one going.

[Absolute Pwnage: HR]

Good 4/5

~review~

It was very good, a huge step up from your last. The animation was very good, but still you need to try just a bit harder on the graphics portion. Some of the gradient fills looked very bad, but for the most part stepped up quite a bit from the last. The sound was goods but needed some new effects as they were reused over and over again. The violence was very good and had some great action moments. The style was good and had a great no brains all brawn feel to it. The visual effects had some great style to it but needed some more expanding.

~good points~
Better graphics
Great style
good visual effects
excellent animation
nice use of different moves and scenes

~things to improve upon~
Better graphics lol
find some more new sound FX

[DCK-Christmas of Horrors]

Good 4/5

~review~

After you not submitting something in awhile i was expecting much more. the animation was well dck limited yet satisfying. The graphics are always reused so no big points there. There was nothing that stood out for this, a very klunk christmas was by far better and submitted long ago :\. The sound was good and the usual DCK style still good. The humor was low for this, it just wasn't funny at all this time.

~good points~
DCK graphics and animation
great sound

~things o improve upon~
Bring back the sort of humor from klunk's christmas
make it longer

[Clockday FBF]

Not good

~review~

Really just all around not good. The graphics looked okay on everything but the clocks. Also there was no humor. Though you probably made it quickly for clock day, you should have put more time and effort in.

~good things~
okay graphics

~things to improve upon~
Make the framerate higher
better graphics plz
humor
have the animation run smoother.

KyleDaFox responds:

I made it in 2 hours, what do you expect?

[ASCII Animation]

Great style!

~review~

Unfortunately, i have seen this style done one time. However this was 10 times better, this was truly amazing. It must have taken a lot of effort to pull that off, and the result is really cool. The graphics get a high score for originality and they were incredibly well done for ascii art. The sound fit the flash well, and was also pretty nice. Overall it was a very solid flash.

~good points~
Great style
pulled off really nicely
inspirational
fitting music

~things to improve upon~
For the first time, nothing this style was just shatteringly well done.

KyleDaFox responds:

Thanks! This was an experiment and I'm glad to see people liked it. I'll make a better one, this took about a week, a new one will take about a month. Thanks for the compliments.

[12 Annoying Days of Xmas]

Amazing

~review~
twas toe tappingly brilliant. the animation was very smooth i liked leetp noob's part best. Hope to see more soon.

~good points~
Good graphics, for the most part
Smooth animation.
good song.

~things to improve on~
you should've coauthored leetpnoob

[How Silvercherry Died #68]

Meh

~review~

It wasn't a bad flash but the same symbol moved for about 30 seconds and then the black clock was tweened in, and more symbols ran. The humor wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly funny. Also people in crew movies combust way too much.

~good points~
fairly good graphics
Kind of funny

~things to improve upon~
Make more movements
Try to have more humor
no more combusting plz