TNOAT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ball Collab]

5/5

Great collab, I rushed my part but I thought my graphics were pretty alright. Everyone did very well.

Metabug: Very nice looking part even though I don't like gradients very much though. The animation was quite smooth and the choice of happening was cool.

Grub: I do not enjoy gradients much but this part was fairly good, the graphics looked nice but I was really disappointed there wasn't sound, it would have made it very complete.

Custard: The graphics were quite good but the animation was a bit choppy and stiff, a wider bit of sound effects could have been used as well. The part was still pretty good though... just a bit choppy.

Ishirm: Best part in my opinion, I liked the simple line 8 music. The animation is very awesome. It had about the best variety of happenings.

Darksoldier: Alright part but the physics didn't seem to real, the gradient looked good in this one though. Pretty nice music and the ball graphics were great.

TNOAT(me): Pretty good graphics and fairly smooth animation, it was really short and you rushed it too. The sound that metabug picked was nice.

Pyrogerbil: I recommend using using some zoom when you draw with the brush, it helps me quite a bit. The gradient looked very good and the sound selection wasn't bad, try redrawing when you do frame-by-frame.

Metabug responds:

thanks for loooong rewiew. :)

[30 Second Collab #2]

Excellent 5/5

Probably one of the best n00bnation collabs ever, I really liked ishirms part the best though. Craigus had a really awesome part as well.

Ishirm: Two pretty good parts, though your first was by far better than your sprite fight.

Craigus: Really awesome part with excellent graphics and animation. The gun effects looked really nice.

Haggard: Your graphics weren't very good but it had pretty smooth animation, I recommend using more layering though.

Rena: Pretty nice two parts but I think you should use some zoom while drawing, also the limbs to your people don't stay in tact as much as they should.

Drunken: I didn't really like your part, as it didn't really have any animation in it at all and was just repetitive humor :\ your graphics and style are still good though.

N00bking: I was disappointed that you didn't use your typical style or shading but the part was still pretty amusing and the time consument didn't really seem to have an effect which isn't such a bad thing.

Queen: You have the sexiest graphics ever :3. The animation on this one was a lot more fluid than the majority of your animations, you should try 20 FPS from now on.

TNOAT(me):sucked.

Mugnus: Really nice looking part, the filtering looked really nice and I really liked the last bit, you are very talented.

Little-Rena responds:

Well, thanks for that review, very long and pritty detailed, I can agree on the most part :P

[N00bKebob #26]

Great Kebob! 5/5

Another great kebob, i'll rate everyone on their parts!

Veindigger: Same part as last time :(, the graphics were alright and the animation was fairly smooth but there should have been some sort of background, sound FX, and try not to use real images they look very unfit for a flash.

King: Excellent everything, your graphics animation and of course voice acting was magnificent, and you said this only took you an hour? You have some serious skill and it is very impressive!

Soul: Great selection of music and of course the oh so classic "Fuzzy transition screen" A nice bunch of loops but I was sad to see that your take on meatspin wasn't in their, well done!

Darksoldier: A nice little part with some fitting music and the rests, I was impressed, being as this your first submitted flash and it is quite a nice part. The graphics were fairly smooth but I'd like to see what you really can do with your own style and coloring, this was basically your landscaping of the house now you just need to structure it and show us what you can do on the higher level, I have a great feeling you will have a great time at n00bnation and it seems you put a fair amount of effort into your part, good job!

Queen: Great graphics and visual effects, my only complaints are that the background in the cell seemed a bit "underdeveloped" and that it was a little inconclusive. But of course your shading and coloring still drives me crazy and the color on some parts seemed as if it had a lower opacity(am I right?) which had a very nice feel to it and looks very good. You are truly one great animator queen.

Little-Rena: A very short part but quite funny, the graphics were ok but I suggest you zoom in as you draw with about a size 3 thickness for lines, as for the humor(which I believe was your main goal here) it seemed very funny and random to say the least. Your shading style is quite nice but on some of the doors and windows the shading seems to be more in the middle than on the edges in stuff, which you might want to clean up a bit more next time, other than that nice sound effects and a good job :).

Craigus: You are one amazing animator, believe it or not you and cosmoseth had both caught my eye numerous times before you even joined n00bnation. How was it working with him? After seeing your masterful explosion in "justify your mind" I have been a fan of yours. Great kebob part but I don't particularly like speakonia voices. The animation was top notch and the humor was really great and sort of ironic. Great job and definitely one of the bet kebob parts I have ever seen (besides Dean-Dobbs only noobkebob part). Once again you are a brilliant animator and I am very glad to have you at noobnation :).

Shinoobi:After seeing a few of your earlier movies I can say you have greatly improved, the music was very deep and vibrant and had a nice feel along with the flash, when the more epic music started playing and I saw the guys with guns (Queenie and the rests) I laughed out loud. The humor was very nice and sort of unexpectant. My favorite thing about you is your great story telling feel and style, your posts on the forum and everything you feature in your animations is very great story-wise. You have tons of great posts on the forum as well with what seems like endless phrases and wisdom, (congrats on getting the kewl by the way) and I am very glad to have someone like you at our forums.

*Good Points*
Most collab parts were very outstanding
Everyone had quite a unique and great style which is the best part about n00bkebobs in my opinion
It seemed the sound in this one was tuned up for all parts

*things to improve upon*
Take some of the suggestions I gave you guys

*TnoaT

N00bNation responds:

:)

[-----Skateboarding------]

Not bad.

Overall, it was a pretty smooth animation, you really got the filtering down. The background is the only thing I can recommend you to improve on, along with making your lines smoother and blood effects cleaner. other than those it looked very nice. It seems like it has a strong resemblance to The Art of Animation.

~the good~
Smooth animation
Good filtering
Fitting sound effects

~Things to improve upon~
Add some more striking color
Make a more full background
Clean the blood splatter up a bit

*TnoaT

[soccer fbf]

Not too bad

It was a fairly smooth animation, the graphics were very lacking..but I can't blame you as it seemed like more of a test. I suggest turning the framerate up for smoother animation, putting the head in a different layer that way you do not have to redraw it over and over and over. It also looks smoother. Also using the line tool is much more efficient, zoom in to about 200% and draw with the 3rd brush side, (much smooth results).

~The Good~
Fairly Smooth animation
Good Concept

~Things to Improve Upon~
The art suggestions I listed above
Drawing a background would look nicer.

*TnoaT

[Strbry Email Extreme 0003]

you are so sexy

This was about the best thing I've seen in my life, you starberry have such a way with words, not those other fagget cox fags there. 10/10 daily feature is on the way.

Starberry responds:

darling come closer, let your worries sink into my arms, close those tired eyes and just drift away as i tUCK YOU TO BED

[BBS Moderators]

Pretty funny

Pretty funny short, but I felt it was just a little bit too short, I didn't like the fact that the tankman didn't actually have a turning animation..rather a distortion turn. It isn't such a bad thing though. The sound quality was good and the graphics were quite smooth other than the background, the brush thickness should have been up a bit there. Overall a nice little short and a quality one at that.

*the good*
Nice tankman graphics
A funny short
Pretty nice voice

*Things to improve upon*
A little more length would be nice
More brush thickness in the background

*TnoaT

[The Death of Ryan]

Not bad

It is not a bad flash but it could definitely use some work, add a replay and play button. The graphics were alright but had a bit to be desired with character design. The blood splatter wasn't bad but the animation definitely could have been smoother. The sound was limited but effective which i suppose is a nice thing. The humor was alright, but average for a "death flash". Overall pretty decent flash but could use some touch ups.

~Good points~
Alright graphics
effective sound
a little funny

~things to improve upon~
Add play and replay buttons
Set the framerate up and add in between frames for smoother animation
A little brush up on the graphics would be nice.

*TnoaT

Rad responds:

I don't know why I took so long to reply to this. A lack of confidence I guess.

Anyway theres a good chance I'll never make anything like this again, but if I do i'll remember your advice.

[gears of war]

I quite liked it

~review~

It was actually quite a good flash with some pretty smooth animation and graphics. It does look a bit noobish, but this is still a very underrated flash. The sound was of the games soundtrack so it was quite good. The graphics had some nice shading but lineart could be improved a bit, but the art style was nice. There was a menu and play button but it wasnt very attractive so no biggie. Good violence i really liked how the turret guy looked. Overall i liked it and this is very underrated.

~good things~
Smooth
Pretty nice graphics
fitting sound

~things to improve upon~
Needs gun sound effects
some better lineart

*TnoaT

[Duck Luck Episode #4]

~Not quite good~

~review~

I was expecting a lot more from something that got a daily feature but that really didn't happen. The sound quality was fairly good. The graphics were pretty lack luster with no shading and not a good art style. The animation was very stiff and still sometimes i felt like it was more of a slideshow than an animation, overall i really didn't enjoy this. The humor also didn't appeal to me :\.

~Good Points~
Good sound quality

~things to improve upon~
Better art and animation
Appealing humor.

*TnoaT

Snubby responds:

meh