TNOAT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Infiltration]

Fairly smooth but very short

~review~

It was quite well animated besides the tweening. The only thing not well animated was the first knife throw it moved far too slow. The sound was average but fit very well. The graphics are madness, which is never a bad thing. Unfortunately this has been done too many times before.

~good points~
Okay graphics
sound fit

~things to improve upon~
The newgrounds preloader is bland
The style has been done too many times before
There wasn't that much going on
not too many sound effects
The walking was tweened
Very short

[The Truth About Clockmas]

Good

~review~

It was a very good flash, but very basic with movements. The humor was pretty good, and it was nice to see something mocking SBC for once. The drawings on the slideshow looked like they were drawn and crayon which definitely added to the humor, it gave it a good look too.

~good points~
Excellent graphics
traditional sound
Good humor

~things to improve upon~
Make a bit more going on perhaps?

RupeeClock responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean, it was pretty still all around since the audience wasn't animated at all. :\

[OMG! SMB Mishaps! 2]

MEh 3/5

~review~

The menu looked truly great. Unfortuantely for the graphics, they were sprited. Which shows no drawing effort by you. The layering was great having things move in front and back of the movie. The humor was not good, it has been done soooooo many times before, the only thing i laughed at is when he hit the block and it said "own3d". The style also was completely unoriginal.

~good points~
Great layering
Smooth sprite animation

~things to improve~
An original idea would be nice.
Reused sound effects, different ones would be nice
Make the humor better

[The Thinking Impaired ep5]

Great

~review~

I've not yet seen this series, I'm gonna say you made a lasting first impression. The humor in it was some of the richest on NG, maybe not the best jokes but certainly many good ones. The graphics were also really good the outlines and the erase line thing on the hair looked good. The voice acting was also very good. The animation was really smooth and well done for the most part, the biggest problem was the lip syncing. It synced with the vice acting but it was see through. I would've liked too see the teeth, tongue, ect.

~good points~
Great new series
Excellent graphics
clear voice acting
nice humor

~things to improve upon~

The lip syncing, tongue, teeth, etc.

Sirklawd responds:

thanks for the input and the good review! I'm glad you liked it overall.

[Christmas for one, please]

Excellent

~review~

A nice tale and a great, style. The clock crew style was really her eon this one and the graphics were quite beautiful. The inward/outward shading looked really nice. The only thing is it ends what sees to me abruptly. Also the version of that song is awfully annoying.

~good points~

Beautiful graphics
a nice tale
Great shading
Art style

~things to improve on~

Add an aftermath
use another version of that song, please.

Eternal-Panda responds:

Merry Christmas

[Problem with the Holidays]

good

~review~

It was pretty good. The sound and voice acting was good. But i think you missed your biggest goal, humor. To me it just wasn't that funny. The brsuhwork was very lacking compared to the pencil tool art. The lip syncing didn't really go completely with the voice acting, the wrong mouth movement often was put in. I like your art style it is very cool.

~good points~

Very long
Solid graphics
Good voice acting
Good art style

~things to improve on~

Try a little harder when using the brush
Correct the lip syncing more next time.
try to connect to everyone with the humor.

[Gift of Ages]

Amazing

~review~

Where to start. That was a nice way to look at beliefs. The graphics went along with the flash so well. The paper cutout look to it was some of the best graphics ever. The only complaint i could have about this flash is that in some parts animation was next to non-existent. Another on the up-side the camera angles were some of the best.

~good points~

Amazing graphics
interesting point of view
good camera angles

~things to improve on~

Pick a more suiting song
Some animation was lacking.

[Remembering Percy]

Amazing!

~review~

Omg you are the new teacher brunswick, without the gay. don't worry thats a compliment. Anyway about your flash, it was amazing. The feel of it was like no other on newgrounds, the story wasn't per say amazing but it was good. The humor was very witty and I actually laughed out loud at some parts. The graphics were pretty solid but at some points weren't perfectly crisp. The animation was pretty good for the most part but things skipped to far between each movement sometimes. Also the sound was great, good voice acting and nice varied voices.

~good points~

Great graphics
Excellent voice acting
Hilarious humor
A style like no other
Killer presentation

~things to improve on~

Like i mentioned earlier the animation between each movement sometimes skipped too far.
Shading was odd at some parts.

[Carol of the Robots]

A nice display of all you can do

~review~

Dustball, you are a great animator and an excellent music maker. But i never though you could combine them this well. I know you did this sort of thing with on water, but this was far better in my opinion. The graphics looked simple but they were very effective in the presentation. The animation looked child-like which was a nice style to it. You really improved from your previous entries.

~good points~

Great style
nice song
Animation was very different
The drawings were a little humorous

~things to improve on~
Make it lengthier
Animation was a little choppy

[Future]

Amazing

~review~

Sheer amazement overcame me when reading this had no 3d programs used in it. That is a huge task for flash, and takes some serious dedication and skill. The style was just amazing. The only thing is this loses my interest really quickly, The animation and graphics are really good, but it is kinda boring. The song was a great choice and really gave it the future feel. Great job!

~good points~
The 3d is amazing, I couldn't believe it was done in flash
The graphics and style are utterly amazing
Good song
Nailed the future feel

~things to improve on~
Make it a bit more interesting.